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Tysiące insektów? Hmmm brzmi ciekawie, szkoda że nie podali ich nazwy, może znamy już te rahi. Kto by pomyślał że Vezon to taki utalentowany poeta
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Czw 19:03, 08 Maj 2008 |
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elwis72
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ja myśle że to mogą być te rahi z karda nui w koncu są rozproszone po swiecie
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Czw 19:16, 08 Maj 2008 |
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Nejo
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Pojawiła się 9 część Federacji, w niej spotykają w końcu Dawnego Lidera Bractwa. Czy ktoś może przetłumaczyć?
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Czw 15:22, 05 Cze 2008 |
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Nuparu2
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No to lecę, zaraz będzie.
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Czw 15:59, 05 Cze 2008 |
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elwis72
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fajna czesc jedna z lepszych a bedzie moze jeszcze jedna?
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Czw 18:26, 05 Cze 2008 |
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Leskovikk
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Nowa część!!!Niestety ostatnia.
| | Vezon looked from the massive, chained form of the dragon-like beast to his partners, then back at the dragon, then over to Brutaka. He opened his mouth to speak, but Brutaka cut him off.
“Don’t say it,” said Brutaka.
“We’re going to need --” Vezon began.
“A bigger boat. I know,” Brutaka said. “Anybody know what those... things... are flying all around?”
Small, winged creatures were indeed flitting all around the dragon. Now and then, one would let out a scream that shattered rock. “They’re called klakk,” said Makuta Spiriah. “Something Mutran created a long time back – their sonic scream is formidable. They must be meant as guardians.”
Brutaka frowned. Guardians, all right, but against whom? He knew the dragon was in fact Makuta Miserix, ex-leader of the Brotherhood. He had been ordered executed, but Makuta Krika had instead chained him up here on the island of Artidax. It was Brutaka’s job to rescue him so the Order of Mata Nui could use him against his former organization.
At that moment, Miserix suddenly took notice of them. His great eyes narrowed as he spoke and his voice rumbled like a distant avalanche. “Who... are... you?”
Brutaka started to say, “Friends,” then decided he didn’t really want to be considered a friend of that thing. “We’re here to free you,” he said instead. “Can you shapeshift to a smaller form?”
“Why would I wish to do that?” asked Miserix. “Do you know how many of these creatures I had to absorb to reach a size where their screams no longer pain me?”
“See, the size is a problem, your immenseness,” Vezon cut in. “We only have a small boat, hardly more than a raft, really, and if it sinks we have to swim. Personally, I am not big on swimming – some friends of mine went for a swim, I heard, and now they look like sea snakes, just a head and a spine. And I have no spine, so I would be just a head, and --”
Miserix’s eyes glowed red. A burst of laser vision struck Vezon, sending him tumbling backwards. “Gnat,” muttered the Makuta.
Turning to check on Vezon, Brutaka saw that Spiriah had backed way up into the shadows. Miserix noticed too and bellowed, “Tell that one to come forth.”
Spiriah took a reluctant step forward. At the sight of another Makuta, the dragon smiled. “Spiriah. I do remember you. When Teridax rose against me, you were one of the first to be by his side. I have so looked forward to meeting you again.”
Brutaka tightened his grip on his weapon. He did not like Miserix’s tone at all.
“Do you know I have not seen one of my species since Krika left me here?” Miserix continued.
“We all meant to come,” Spiriah said hurriedly. “Teridax wouldn’t let us. We all knew we would benefit by your experience, your power, your very presence.”
“But you did not come,” rumbled Miserix. “So now I shall benefit from yours.”
A hand made of living shadow erupted from the dragon’s chest, grabbed Spiriah, and pulled him into Miserix’s body. There wasn’t even time for a scream.
Vezon, back on his feet, stopped dead when he saw the Makuta consumed. “I thought we were here to rescue him from captivity,” he whispered. “Not from that mid-day empty feeling.”
“You know, we could just leave you here to rot,” Brutaka said to Miserix. “Or wait for the next volcanic eruption to rain lava down on your oversized head. Or... you could have your chance to take revenge on your brothers. What’s it going to be?”
Miserix considered. Then he leaned forward as far as his chains would allow him and said, “Make your attempt, for what good it will do.”
“I have seen those kind of chains before,” said Lariska. “They grow and shrink with him. They feed on his own power and use it to hold him.”
Brutaka hefted his weapon. “Can they be broken?”
“Not without causing him great pain.”
Brutaka gave a grim smile. “I’ll cry tomorrow. Find me a weak link. Roodaka, we are going to need your help.”
The Vortixx had been silent since they had entered Miserix’s presence. Brutaka had no doubt she was planning something. But she dutifully stepped forward and stood beside him, her eyes never leaving the chained Makuta.
“There,” said Lariska, pointing to a segment of the chain that held Miserix’s right arm. “We concentrate our fire there.”
Brutaka and Roodaka took aim, he with his blade, she with her outstretched hand. Energy and shadow bolts struck the weak segment of chain, bathing it in a continuous stream of power. After several minutes, the substance of the chain began to flake off. After a few more, it began to crack. Then the link shattered to pieces. Miserix screamed, loud enough to crack the mountain itself.
The klakk reacted instantly, flying toward the rescue team and unleashing their sonic screams. Vezon and Lariska fought them off, while Brutaka used his blade to parry the streams of sound. Meanwhile, Miserix raised his arm tentatively. Seeing that it was indeed free of its bonds, he reached over with it and tore the other chain from the ground. This time, he did not scream, but only smiled.
The klakk were gaining ground now, driving the team back toward where the insects were still lurking. Miserix watched the battle for a moment in silence. Then he opened his mouth and unleashed a power scream that felled the klakk, along with Vezon and Lariska. Brutaka and Roodaka barely remained conscious. Crawling over, Brutaka checked on his two team members – both were still living.
“Now, then,” said Miserix. “Where is Teridax?”
Brutaka laughed. “And if I tell you, you have no reason to keep us alive. Gratitude is not high on the list of Makuta emotions. I’ll show you. But you are going to need to shrink down to make it out the way we came.”
“Your lack of imagination is disappointing,” said Miserix, in as close to good spirits as a Makuta ever got. He reared back and struck the side of the mountain with all his might, once, twice, again. The rock cracked and began to crumble. Miserix followed up with his fragmentation power, reducing the entire side of the volcano to shards of stone. Beyond it, Brutaka could see the sky and the sea.
“At last!” said Miserix. “After so many millennia – I am free!”
Before Brutaka’s startled eyes, the dragon grew wings. Then Miserix turned his crimson-scaled head to Brutaka and said, “Come. Show me where my enemy hides, so I may grind his armor to dust and feed on his energies.”
“No!” shouted Roodaka. “They want to lead you into a trap! Listen to me, I too am an enemy of the Brotherhood. Brutaka wants to use you, to sacrifice you as a pawn in a war against the Makuta. I want you for an ally!”
Miserix lowered his lead and leaned in so that his massive face was up against Roodaka’s. When he spoke, it was in a whisper. “Little one, I am Makuta Miserix. I am no one’s pawn. I am no one’s ally.” His next words came in a roar that drove Roodaka back into the rock wall. “And I am no one’s fool!!”
Brutaka watched, looking unimpressed. “Are you done?”
Miserix nodded slowly. “Let us go. I have a universe to rediscover.”
Brutaka loaded the stunned Roodaka and the now semi-conscious Lariska and Vezon onto the dragon’s back. Then he climbed on himself. Miserix unfurled his wings and stepped out into the open air. They soared high above the island, pausing only long enough for Miserix to make a muttered vow to come back and destroy the place one day. Brutaka noted that the team’s boat was gone – Takadox had gotten away after all, then.
Let him run. It doesn’t matter, thought Brutaka. A storm is coming to this universe, and when it hits, there will be nowhere for anyone to hide.
Miserix spread his wings and turned toward the north, carrying his passengers into the unknown. |
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Nuparu2
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Zaraz będzie.
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Pon 13:57, 30 Cze 2008 |
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Nejo
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Ta dziesiąta część po prostu zwaliła mnie z nóg: Spiriah zabity przez Miserixa, Takadox ucieka łodzią Federacji, Vezon, Lariska i Roodaka odlatują na plecach Miserixa, a Brutaka jest sam na Artidaxie. No, to dopiero jest część.
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Pon 14:20, 30 Cze 2008 |
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Lemonardo
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| | Ta dziesiąta część po prostu zwaliła mnie z nóg: Spiriah zabity przez Miserixa, Takadox ucieka łodzią Federacji, Vezon, Lariska i Roodaka odlatują na plecach Miserixa, a Brutaka jest sam na Artidaxie. No, to dopiero jest część. |
1. Ost za niedochowanie Spoilera. Poprawiłem twojego Posta.
2. Brutaka nie został na Artidaxie...
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Pon 14:24, 30 Cze 2008 |
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elwis72
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najlepsza czesc tylko ciekawi mnie gdzie jest takadox
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Pon 15:10, 30 Cze 2008 |
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Avak42
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mi sie wydaje że misterix został uwolniony żeby wybić wszyskich makuta a potem:
a)Sam zginie
b)dołączy do jakiejś organizacji
c)znowu go przyskrzynią
[Nawet nie próbuj dawać mu ostrzeżenia Lemo, najpierw przeczytaj co napisałem w dyskusjach - ToP]
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Pon 15:50, 30 Cze 2008 |
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Toa Protodermis
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Swoją ścieżką, sposób w jaki Greg opisał Miserixa jest dosyć dziwny. Jeszcze niedawno sam mówił że wszyscy Makuta potencjalnie dysponują jednakową siłą, tylko że przez lata praktyki każdy z nich specjalizuje się w czym innym. Tymczasem opis Miserixa w 10 części FoF sugeruje że jest on na dużo wyższym poziomie mocy niż inni Makuta. Zwłaszcza fakt że tak łatwo wchłonął Spiriaha. Nawet Teridaxowi z Nivawkiem dłużej zeszło...
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Takanui
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Opowieść ciekawa, ale sądzę że ta opowieść nie skończy się latem..
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Wto 6:55, 01 Lip 2008 |
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Lemonardo
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| | Swoją ścieżką, sposób w jaki Greg opisał Miserixa jest dosyć dziwny. Jeszcze niedawno sam mówił że wszyscy Makuta potencjalnie dysponują jednakową siłą, tylko że przez lata praktyki każdy z nich specjalizuje się w czym innym. Tymczasem opis Miserixa w 10 części FoF sugeruje że jest on na dużo wyższym poziomie mocy niż inni Makuta. Zwłaszcza fakt że tak łatwo wchłonął Spiriaha. Nawet Teridaxowi z Nivawkiem dłużej zeszło... |
Miserix przez tysiące lat budował coraz większą zbroję, co dodawało mu sił. Teridax jako Dume też miał mniej siły niż po pochłonięciu Nivavka, Nidhikiego i Krekki. A nad Ręką Cienia Miserix może ma wysoki poziom kontroli jak Chirox.
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Wto 7:45, 01 Lip 2008 |
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ARES PRIME
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Dośc pokręcone zakończenie. Choć sposób opisania Miserixa przypomina mi opis Smauga z Hobbita.
Trochę szkoda mi Spiriaha , ale w końcu musiał tak czy inaczej zginąć.
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Wto 20:13, 01 Lip 2008 |
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Nie możesz pisać nowych tematów Nie możesz odpowiadać w tematach Nie możesz zmieniać swoich postów Nie możesz usuwać swoich postów Nie możesz głosować w ankietach
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